Thursday, 7 November 2013

Research and Planning: First draft of Script

Script Draft 1

Scene 1

Aby: I don't understand why we have to go and see them. You see them every Christmas
Chris: But its my family. I miss them and they really want to meet you

Scene 2

Chris: Look if you don't want to come you don't have to. I just thought it would be nice to spend some time away from uni.
(In car)
Chris: You ready?

Scene 3

Tracy: Aww come here
Andrew: Have you done this to him?
Chris: Mun, Dad this is Aby

Scene 4
(In kitchen) 

Tracy: She seems nice
Chris: She is yeah
Tracy: Oh did I tell you Megan's coming over for dinner
Chris: Megan my ex girlfriend Megan?


Scene 5
(Dinner Table)

Andrew: How long has it been since you two last saw each other?
Megan: Must be about 3 years
Chris: Yeah. It's gone fast.

Scene 6

Megan: Thats my Dad, I best get off
Chris: I'll see you out.

(at front door)

Megan: It was really nice seeing you
Chris: You too
Aby: Chris are you coming inside
Megan: Bye

Scene 7
(In guest bedroom)

Aby: I saw the way you were looking at her
Chris: I don't know what you're talking about
Aby: Yes you do, you couldn't keep your eyes off her. It was as if i wasn't even there
Chris: Stop being so dramatic
Aby: Is that what you think
Chris: Well you are aren't you?
Aby: I thought we came here to spend time with each other but you clearly want to be with her
Chris: Its not my fault I haven't seen her for years
Aby: Well you can spend as much time as you like with her. I'm going home.
Chris: You being serious?


Scene 8
(Aby drives off)

Chris: *sigh*

Scene 9
(In living room)

Chris: I can't believe she left, thanks for coming over.
Megan: Its fine honest. I thought you'd be upset so I brought you something
Megan: *Comforting noises* I've missed you
Chris: Ive missed you too

Scene 10
(Guest Bedroom)

Megan: Look, that shouldn't have happened you have a girlfriend

Chris: What did we even do last night
Megan: I don't know but I remember laughing a lot*laughs*
I best be going. Let me know when you're next visiting


Scene 11
(bathroom)

Chris: *sobbing* Why doesn't she love me


Scene 12
(Megans living room)
*tears roll down Megans face*


Scene 13
(at dinner in Parents house)

Tracy: Cousin Anthony is coming up to see us tomorrow. Im not sure if he's bringing Hayley and the knids. That should be nice.
Chris: Yeah that sounds good
Andrew: You really like her don't you
Chris: It doesn't matter I'm not going to see her again anyway

*Knock at the door*

Andrew: Shall I go?
Chris: No its alright I'll get it

*opens door* 

Chris: Megan

1 comment:

  1. Good job Rebecca - keep up the excellent use of technology and draft your posters and magazine as well as analysing your magazines x 2.

    Try and personalise your blog now by adding individual posts about your poster and magazine different from your partners.

    You also need sound for your animatic storyboard!

    This could easily be an A grade with these extra tweaks!

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